高考英语读后续写写作技巧及范例解析

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读后续写是要求考生根据给定的文章开头和关键词,续写故事。

                     

                 一、读后续写技巧

1.读文

精读文章,确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读 文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索,比如,是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索, 这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。确定文章体裁和主要内容(话题)。注意文中的关键词,也就是故事中的时间、地点、人物和事件等信息。


2.审题

仔细审题,明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写 的具体要求,如词数限制、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生才能做到“心中有 数”。


3.谋段

在读文、审题的基础上,先仔细阅读续写部分所给出的两段段首文字,再 构思这两段要写的段落大意。根据原文情节确定好段落大意,找出每一段的写 作要点,然后再补充相关细节和常识,这两段加起来要能写出10到15个句子, 以满足续写词数的要求。


4.初写

拟写草稿,修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后,拟写草稿。拟写时, 注意句子结构的多样性及语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用, 使上下文连贯。写作时要注意,所用的人称和时态要与原材料一致。


5.定稿

完成初稿后,考生需先结合原材料中故事线索读一读自己续写的内容,既 要确保所写内容没有与原材料相矛盾的地方,又要保证内容上前后连贯,语句 通顺;然后润色续写部分,可使用高分单词或短语,运用各种从句、介词短语 结构、非谓语动词等高级表达,合理添加过渡词;最后誉写文字,务必做到字迹工整、清晰。


                         二、范例


I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.

That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.

Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was along queue(队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "We made it," he said.

Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: "Out of order. Sorry."

注意:

(1)续写词数为150个左右;

(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答


续写第一段

①I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 


②续写第二段

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.


                         三、解析

首先

1.审题(确定主题:友情,诚信建设...)

2.立意(确定末句:末句一定要点题)

3.构思(内容情节、锁定人物以动作链为核心、伴以情感心境描写)


然后思考情节

Para 1


思路

1.告知 2.Gunter的反应(疑惑、不知所措)3.我的反应(不好意思、解释、承诺、抵押保证.....)4.Gunter的反应(体谅理解、动作、言语、心理...)5.我的反应(感激、动作...)          

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news, He looked at me_______________(难以置信地),_________(ask) me what to do.______________________________________(向他投以一个歉意的微笑), I begged him for_______________(改天给钱). "If I miss this last bus to Prague, !'I will be late for the conference_________is so important that________________________________(不能错过)!" I explained. "May I have your phone number? I will call you and________________________________(还你钱), I promise I will___________________________(信守承诺) or you keep my watch!"I added, ___________(递给) him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card___________________________(但拒绝了我的手表). He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. "Just keep your promise, Sir." ________________________________(一种感激之情涌上心头)as I heard his words, ____________(give) him a firm handshake,I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.          


Para2


思路

1.相约 2.见面 3.寒暄,道谢 4.还钱,还礼5.点题:友情或诚信建设

Four days later, when I was back in Vienna,  I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station________he had dropped me off four days before. ________________________________(脸上带着温暖的微笑), I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We_______________________________(一路上有说有笑) to the airport.I told him that ________________________________(多亏了他的慷慨和及时帮助), everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the "double car ride", back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I______________________________(我别无选择,只好...) give him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague,________he accepted_______________(高兴地), ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


                       四、实战演练

            (注意高级词汇及语法的运用)

Para 1

I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news, He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do(现在分词短语做状语).Flashing him another apologetic smile(现在分词短语做状语), l begged him for a delayed payment. "If l miss this last bus to Prague, I'll be late for the conference which is so important(定语从句) that l can't afford to miss it!" l explained. "May I have your phone number? l will call you and return the money l owe you(定语从句), l promise l will keep my word or you keep my watch!" l added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. "Just keep your promise, Sir." A feeling of gratitude (无灵主语)washed over me as l heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake(现在分词短语做状语), I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.

我跑回去找冈特,把这个坏消息告诉了他。他难以置信地看着我,问我该怎么办。我又向他露出一个歉意的微笑,请求他宽限几天。“如果错过了这班去布拉格的未班车,我就赶不上会议了,这次会议非常重要,不容有失!”我解释道。“能给我你的电话号码吗?我会给你打电话,把欠你的钱还给你。我保证说到做到,否则你就拿着我的手表!”我一边说着,一边把手表和名片递给他。冈特收下了我的名片,但拒绝接受我的手表。他写下了自己的电话号码并给了我。“请遵守诺言,先生。当我听到他的话时,一种感激之情涌上心头。我给了他一个坚定的握手,从车里跳了出来,疯狂地跑向公共汽车,并在它出发前跳上了车。


Para2

Four days later, when l was back in Vienna, l called Gunter as promised, He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off(定语从句) four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him(现在分词短语做状语), l gave him a big hug the moment l saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. l told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the "double car ride", back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down(定语从句). l had no choice but to (别无选择,但是)give him an attractive souvenir l had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight(非限制性定语从句), in this way, we became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly, l felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter who has a heart of gold(定语从句).

四天后,当我回到维也纳时,我如约给冈特打了电话。他在四天前送我来的公交车站接我。见到他时,我脸上带着温暖的微笑,给了他一个大大的拥抱。在去机场的路上,我们愉快地聊着天。我告诉他,多亏了他的慷慨和及时帮助,一切都很顺利。他的出租车停在机场外时,我付了“双程车费”,从机场到公交车站,还给了他一份慷慨的小费,但他拒绝了。我别无选择,只好送给他我在布拉格买的一个有吸引力的纪念品,他高兴地接受了。就这样,我们成了好朋友,经常保持联系。我感到很幸运能有像冈特这样心地善良的好朋友。

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