一、衔接过渡语和主旨升华句的重要性
高中英语读后续写中,衔接过渡语和主旨升华都具有重要意义:
衔接过渡语的重要性
1.使文章连贯流畅:能让故事的情节发展更加自然,比如“suddenly”“then”“after that”等词,可清晰展现事件发生的先后顺序,让读者能跟上故事的节奏,不会感到突兀。
2.增强逻辑关系:像“however”“therefore”“moreover”等词,能明确句子或段落间的逻辑,如转折、因果、递进等关系,有助于读者理解故事的内在逻辑。
3.提升语言质量:恰当使用衔接过渡语,体现考生对英语语言的熟练运用,使文章更具可读性和专业性,从而提升整体语言质量和得分。
主旨升华的重要性
1.深化主题思想:可以将故事从简单的情节叙述提升到对人生、社会、人性等方面的思考,如通过故事传达出“坚持就是胜利”“友谊的珍贵”等道理,让文章更有深度。
2.引发情感共鸣:当文章有了深刻的主旨,能触动读者的情感,让读者在阅读中产生共鸣,使读者更能记住文章。
3.展示思维品质:能够展现考生的思维深度和广度,体现对问题的深入思考和独特见解,有助于提高作文的档次和分数。
如此重要的两部分如何写好呢,小编今天给大家总结了几种句式和方法。
二、衔接过渡语的常用句式
(1)形容词(短语)作状语
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business. Anxious and full of expectation,he took the popcorn around to the houses and began to sell his popcorn.
一切准备就绪后,伯纳德开始着手他的新生意。既焦虑又满怀期待,他拿着爆米花挨家挨户地开始售卖。
(2)非谓语动词作状语
We sat down next to each other,but David wouldn't look at me. Seeing his face filled with anxiety,I felt sad,deciding to talk something with him.
我们紧挨着坐了下来,但大卫不愿看我。看着他那充满焦虑的脸,我感到很难过,决定和他说点什么。
(3)倒装句衔接
As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.In no time did their father seem to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next.
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。他们的父亲似乎很快就明白了到底发生了什么事,下一步该怎么办。
(4)介词短语或副词作状语衔接
A few weeks later,when I almost forgot the contest,there came the news.Much to my surprise/Surprisingly,I beat a lot of participants and won the first prize.
几个星期后,当我几乎忘记比赛的时候,传来了消息。令我吃惊的是,我打败了很多参赛者,获得了第一名。
(5)对话或者独白衔接
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. “Congratulations! Your efforts paid off!”,said he smilingly.
颁奖典礼结束后,我去了老师的办公室。“祝贺你!你的努力得到了回报!”他微笑着说。
(6)状语从句衔接
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.The minute I stepped in,he laughed out loud again as has had before,and said “Congratulations!”
颁奖典礼结束后,我去了老师的办公室。我一进门,他又像以前一样大笑起来,说“祝贺你!”
三、主旨升华的常用方法和句式
6种主旨升华的方法
(1)名言结尾法
需要注意的是:不可生搬硬套名言警句,一定要具体文本,具体分析。
①Just as the saying goes,one person can go far,but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话说,一个人可以走得很远,但一群人可以走得更远。
②Just as the saying puts,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”Now I couldn't agree more.
正如俗话所说,“有志者,事竟成。”现在我完全同意。
(2)情感升华法
Seeing the javelin,I felt as if it had been encouraging me and saying,“You've found your talent and I've found you.”
看到标枪,我觉得它好像在鼓励我,并说,“你找到了你的天赋,我找到了你。”
(3)运用修辞法
①I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene—we were robbed by a polar bear.
我迅速拿出相机,拍下了这一罕见的场景——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了。
②That affection towards our family is like a touch of green tea,refreshing and heartwarming.
那份对我们家人的感情像一杯清茶,沁人心脾,温暖人心。
(4)首尾呼应法
①A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.
一天,在亚瑟上班的路上发生了一件有趣的事情。
②What a funny day!Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this happy experience.
多么有趣的一天啊!每当亚瑟想起这次欢乐的经历,他就忍不住笑个不停。
(5)感悟体会法
①From the experience,I was fully aware of the responsibility and great value as a doctor,which,therefore,inspired me to continue to pursue my dream.
从这些经验中,我充分意识到作为一名医生的责任和巨大的价值,因此,这激发了我继续追求我的梦想。
②I held the paper bag tightly,tears rolling down without control.It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋,眼泪禁不住流了下来。正是爱让这世界转动,在我心里深深感受到了这一点。
(6)画面定格法
①The children said loudly,“Happy Mother's Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
孩子们大声说:“母亲节快乐!”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们,一次又一次地吻着他们。
②In the evening,Dad came back.I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
那天晚上,爸爸回来了。我骄傲地拿出了我自己的钱,递给了爸爸。
5种常用句式
(1)only引起的倒装句
①Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时我才意识到,正是勇敢才能克服前进道路上的一切困难。
②Only when we open up the door of our heart can we be bathed in the brilliant sunshine and enjoy the warmth of love.
只有当我们打开心门,我们才能沐浴在灿烂的阳光下享受爱的温暖。
(2)强调句型
It was a simple knot and an understanding heart that saved me from the awkward situation.
正是这一个简单的绳结和一颗善解人意的心将我从尴尬中拯救出来。
(3)From then on+表行动的句子
①From then on,I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others.
从那以后,我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。
②From that day on,every time I meet someone who needs help,I always reach out to them,hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.
从那天起,每当我遇到需要帮助的人,我总是伸出手去帮助他们,希望把墨西哥家庭给予我的善良传递下去。
(4)Sometimes+表感悟类的句子
①Sometimes,a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
有时候,那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大,而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
②Sometimes a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时候一个小小的善举可能会产生巨大的影响。
(5)综合型组合公式:结果+难忘的经历+体悟
I thought about what had just happened.What I was eager to utter was that it was such an exceedingly memorable experience that I would never forget.
我想了想刚才发生的事。我急切想说的是,这是一次极其难忘的经历,我永远不会忘记。