高考英语 | 八省联考英语书面表达读后续写解析及参考范文

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.

I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.

It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers — very big, tough-looking bikers.

I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men — all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club — standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?

A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.

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I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.

When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.

一、知故事大意

阅读材料讲述了作者在费城出差时，看到一则关于当地动物救助组织的纪录片宣传广告。由于不愿独自一人外出，作者本打算在酒店房间度过这个晚上。然而，在感到无聊后，作者鼓起勇气前往剧院观看纪录片，但在剧院前遇到了一个由许多大块头骑士组成的团体。作者一开始感到非常紧张，认为自己可能会遇到麻烦，甚至有点后悔自己的决定。尽管如此，作者最终决定进入剧院，希望能安全观看电影。续写部分要求构思作者进入剧院后发生的事情，特别是揭示摩托车骑士的真实身份，以及作者是如何从恐惧转向安心。

二、审篇章段落

阅读材料由五段组成，各段段落大意如下：

第一段：作者在费城参加会议时，看到一个关于动物救助的纪录片广告，想去观看募捐活动，但由于没有同事陪伴，且担心独自外出，犹豫是否前往。

第二段：作者回到酒店后感到无聊和不安，决定克服恐惧，前往剧院。剧院距离酒店只有五个街区，周围环境看起来不危险，于是决定出发。

第三段：天色已晚，街道几乎空无一人。作者找到了剧院所在的街道，但转角后却被眼前的一群看起来强壮威猛的摩托车骑行者吓到。

第四段：虽然作者知道许多摩托车爱好者是友善的人，但此时作为一个独自女性，身处陌生的街区，面对一群身穿标志的摩托车骑行者，作者感到非常害怕，并开始怀疑自己是否来错了地方。

第五段：尽管感到害怕，作者看到剧院的标志确认自己来对了地方。她决定进入剧院，希望里面会更安全，并祈祷摩托车骑行者会离开。

三、定叙事结构

从结构上看，文章采用了“设悬念—解谜”的叙事方式。阅读材料部分通过详细描写作者的心理活动，尤其是对这群骑士的恐惧，制造了紧张氛围。而续写部分则要求合理构思情节解开这个谜团，让整个故事从紧张转为轻松，传递出一个积极向上的信息。续写部分要继续延续这个悬念并最终解答，保证故事有完整的闭环。

四、构写作思路

一）续写第一段写作思路

续写第一段的段落开头语是“我匆匆进入剧院，结果发现剧院里还有更多的摩托车骑士。”这暗示作者原本的恐惧没有完全消失，她进入剧院后发现情况并没有改善，反而有更多的骑士。这一段我们需要保持文章的紧张气氛和悬疑感，可通过环境的描写、作者的心理活动，以及骑士们的举止，来继续加强这种悬疑氛围。

二）续写第二段写作思路

续写第二段的段落开头语是“在电影开始后，我意识到这些骑士其实是一个动物救助组织的成员。” 在这一段的续写中，我们需要揭示这些骑士其实是参与动物救援活动的志愿者。可以通过对影片内容的描述、骑士们的行为等，让读者逐渐意识到他们并不是“坏人”，而是为了公益事业而聚集在一起。通过这个转折，消除之前的紧张氛围，并传达一种温暖和正能量。

五、参考范文

范文1

I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were sitting in groups, some talking in low voices while thers quietly sipped on their drinks. Their tough appearance didn’t seem to match the peaceful atmosphere inside the theater. As I walked in, one of them smiled at me, which made me feel unexpectedly calm. I nervously scanned the room, but instead of angry looks, I was met with friendly glances. Still, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I was out of place. But then, the lights went down, and the film began.

When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed their incredible efforts to save abandoned dogs, often risking their own safety to rescue animals from dangerous situations. The bikers appeared on screen, helping with the transportation and care of the dogs. I felt a wave of relief and admiration wash over me. They weren’t the tough, scary people I had first thought; instead, they were heroes, working to make the world a better place for the helpless animals. (184 words)

范文2

I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. The room was dimly lit, and several large men in leather jackets sat scattered across the rows, their presence as imposing as it had been outside. I hesitated for a moment at the door, unsure whether I should stay or leave. The air felt heavy with uncertainty. As I stepped in, a couple of the bikers looked up and nodded at me, but none of them seemed threatening. Despite their tough appearance, they were quietly chatting among themselves, and I couldn’t shake the feeling that they weren’t as dangerous as they looked. Still, my heart was racing, and I tried to stay calm, hoping the situation would resolve itself soon.

When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. The documentary showed images of these men working together to rescue abandoned dogs and bring them to safety. They were shown lovingly feeding and caring for the animals, their tough, rugged personalities blending seamlessly with their gentle actions. I couldn’t help but feel a sense of relief wash over me as I watched the film, realizing that these bikers were there for a noble cause. The fear I had felt earlier faded, replaced by a deep respect for their dedication and kindness. (220 words)