高中英语读后续写历险脱困类话题语料及金句

高中英语读后续写历险脱困类话题语料及金句

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一、火灾救援动作链：

察觉异常（闻到焦味/听到巨响）→ 迅速确认灾难源头 → 寻找最近的逃生路径 → 迅速逃离 → 找到安全位置她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味，立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看，发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起手机，冲向大门 → 一边拨打119，一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后，她终于松了一口气。

She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing→ She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.

二、地震逃生动作链：

察觉到灾难逼近→ 确定最佳逃生路径 → 准备逃生用品 → 按照计划逃生 → 确保安全后停止行动他感到地面剧烈震动→ 马上确定通往出口的最短路线 → 拿上背包中的急救包和水 → 沿着走廊迅速朝出口方向跑去 → 到达户外空旷地后，他停下来，检查自己是否受伤。

He felt the ground shake violently→ Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit → Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack → Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit → After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured.

三、落水救援动作链：

意识到无法独自脱险→ 寻找求救工具（电话/信号设备）→ 发送求救信号（拨打电话/发射信号）→ 等待救援 → 确认救援抵达她意识到自己被困在水中，无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板，用随身携带的手机拨打求救电话 → 等待救援时，她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音，她的心情逐渐平静下来。

She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore→ She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.

四、迷路脱困动作链：

初步线索失败→ 重整计划寻找 → 新的线索引导 → 途中遇到挫折或意外 → 最终找到目标他先去常去的咖啡馆找她，但没找到→ 重新思考她可能去的地方 → 突然想到她提过的公园 → 在公园里找了半天，甚至跟一位陌生人发生了争执 → 终于在一个偏僻的长椅上发现了她，她正静静地坐着。

He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there→ Reconsidered where she might have gone → Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park → Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger → Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench.

五、野生动物救助动作链：

发现动物受困→ 判断如何解救 → 获取工具或方法 → 接近动物 → 实施救援 → 检查动物状态他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗，安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上，慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后，他检查了一下它的四肢，确保没有受伤。

He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river→ Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sure it wasn’t injured.

遇困过程中动作心态描写

1.我假装镇定，以最大的声音呼救 I pretended to be calm and shouted at the top of my voice.

2.我声嘶力竭的大叫，试图引起某人的注意I screamed at the top of my lungs, trying to get someone's attention.

3.他们脸都吓白了，哭喊着救命。The children were so scared that their faces were pale, crying for help.

4.Time ticked away slowly, just as he was feeling himself fishing away when death was drawing near.  时间缓缓流逝，就在他感觉自己要淹死了的时候，救援队赶到了。

5. He shook the snow away with bare hands, then freed his out, and managed to pull himself out.  他抖掉手上的雪，然后拔出手来。

6. He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this breathing. 他费力地做着微小的呼吸，努力把注意力集中在这种呼吸上，以保持积极的心态。

7. When he drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend was not buried so deep. He held on that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety.当他被埋在雪下时，他惊恐万分，希望他的朋友没有被埋得那么深。他像抓住一根能把他拉到安全处的绳子，企盼这个渺茫的可能性。

8. It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky. We had no idea where we were.  天地完全黑了，只有几颗星星发出微光。我们不知道自己在哪儿。

脱险后感激、高兴

1. Frightened and tired as I was, I congratulated myself on returning safe and sound. 尽管我又害怕又累，我还是庆幸自己安然无恙地回来了。

2.所有在场的人都松了一口气All presented breathed/let out a sigh of relief.

3.用仅有的力气，他们击掌庆祝。With a dash of energy, we high-fived each other.

4.要不是你,我可能已经死了。Had it not been for you, we would have died.

5.我用露齿的笑容回应了他们的感谢。I returned their gratitude and praise with a toothy smile.

升华主题

1. Feeling fortunate, I made up my mind to cherish life and not to try adventure again. 我庆幸之余决定珍惜生命，不再冒这样的险。

2. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm. 

最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。

3. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life. 我们的迷路给我的冒险假期增添了一份特别的滋味，我将终生难忘。

4. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply impressive in my mind. 我以前从未度过如此惊险而又危险的假期。这次西部大之旅给我留下了深刻的印象。

5. Not everything that is faced can be changed, but nothing can be changed until it is faced.并不是你面对了，就能改变什么。但是，如果你不肯面对，就什么也改变不了。

6. It occurred to me that helping others is priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然意识到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。

7.I realized how lucky I was to be rescued and how blessed I am to have such supportive friends.我意识到能够被营救、能够有这样支持我的朋友是多么幸运。

8. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn't lose heart.

正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。

9.Had it not been for the unique adventure/rescue, we would never have discovered how brave and quick -thinking we were.

如果没有那次独特的冒险/救援，我们永远不会发现自己有多勇敢和思维敏捷。

10.The noise of the city seem to fade away, as if to witness this kindness between humans/strangers.这个城市的喧嚣似乎消失了，仿佛是为了见证人与人之间/陌生人之间的这份善意。